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Intended for a younger audience, I believe the rhyming trivializes the significance of the event. I'm not comfortable reading about a church shooting in couplets. This was such a poignant event in our history. Nonfiction text would be more impactful: Obama taking the risk of singing instead of speaking and then choosing the most spiritual dirge in our cultural history, so much there and yet missed by the restrictive laws of iambic pentameter.
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