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1 ⭐ Once again, the front matter and the back matter are above the level the story is written at. All this front matter should be moved to the back. For this story, I didn‘t really like the story. Thomas needs to get in his snowsuit, but he fights with everyone, and gets adults to fight, just because he does not want to wear his snowsuit. I think this is a bad message, and a bad example. The cloths switching thing could be fun if done better.
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