so-so
POV: a soldier of a conquering empire tries to rescue his commander from the enemy‘s hands.
Not as fun as the other two Goddard‘s stories I‘ve just read. It would‘ve benefitted from a closer encounter with an editor. It also ends abruptly, and the writing style feels different, not as fairytale-ish. Well, at least the worldbuilding is still good. This #fantasy world is promising, though, and I will continue.
#onedayread #shortstory #series
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