Prologue. Bail. As far as I can tell, the hero was left at the alter but this is not exactly spelled out -- although every single thought and action other than the pertinent backstory are lavishly described.
Books like this are exactly why I love preview excerpts. This immersive, emotion-laden, stream-of-conscious writing style is too melodramatic for me.
esurient Translation, snark -- Oh god this is awful! Throw it at the wall! 3y
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