Paul‘s decline rang true for me as I have experienced similar circumstance with my Dad‘s slow neuro PSP decline. This story is from Fay‘s POV-not Paul‘s. She is angry at him before she finally accepts his diagnosis, and that is very HARD. But I believe it is also true-to-life in many instances. So I appreciate that.
I wanted a much deeper experience with Paul and Fay, more remorse from Fay‘s anger and rudeness, and just more emotion overall.