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I was expecting much better & could not connect. Really good premise & excellent bones, but the execution was not there. The writing was choppy & sometimes made absolutely no sense. Things moved so slowly that I just couldn't be bothered to care. The outline version would still draw my interest now that I know how the book goes, the writing just didn't flesh the story out in a way that worked for me. It had promise, but just did not get there.
Michael_Gee Beautiful cover! Reminds me of Vanessa Bell‘s covers for Woolf‘s books. 3y
ElleMNOpe The cover is what sucked me in. 😉 3y
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