so-soSo, the principle of the story was very good. And it's impressive that it was published and has a relatively wide release. The problem is it was easy to see it as the initial book in the series. Typos, awkward phrasing and some strange plot shifts threw me for a loop. I was left with a cliff hanger, and will give it some thought before I pick up book 2. #indieauthor #Comicconfind #lastread
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