

May has long been an influencer, mining her kids‘ lives for content. Now her husband (and the adult kids‘ stepdad) is found dead in suspicious circumstances. Partly a whodunit and partly a (valid) critique/condemnation of using kids for content, this one dilutes out the possibilities of both. There‘s some good stuff here, but it could have been so good with a lot more editing.
IriDas I hear that complaint too often these days: this could have been better with some editing. :/ As a former editor (because there aren‘t enough jobs) this really is upsetting. 5d
Hooked_on_books @IriDas That would be upsetting for sure! And I do feel like I‘ve seen this problem more as the years have gone by. I hope publishing takes note, but we‘ll just have to see, I guess. 🤷🏼♀️ 5d
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