bailed
The plot sounded thrilling, however the writing was dreadful. Sentence structure reminiscent of my six year old's literacy homework. Didn't make it through the first chapter.
JonathanDunne Oh dear😦 8y
RedLeaves Oh dear indeed @JonathanDunne I wanted to stamp "Show don't tell" across the pages! 8y
JonathanDunne Hmm @RedLeaves 8y
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