This book is full of #photochallenge material.
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tournevis Who was the editor, that I find them and kick them hard!? 6y
julesG @tournevis 😁😁 Naaa! Don't kick them. It's well-edited in most parts. We all know that editing slacks around the middle until shortly before hitting the 95% hurdle. 6y
julesG @tournevis "Lauren ... at Legend Press" 6y
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tournevis @julesG I'm demanding of editors. 😏 6y
tournevis @julesG Noted... 😜 6y
julesG @tournevis I'm also demanding. Just haven't found the courage to actually go kick butts yet. 😉 6y
tournevis @julesG I've been known to ask very pointed questions in letters. 6y
BookNAround See now I took this as his academic gown being pulled on over his goofy jammies so this line didn‘t bother me at all. 6y
julesG @BookNAround That's how I read it too. 6y
julesG @BookNAround I think there's a comma missing in the next sentence,though. Or is that just my German love of commas? 6y
BookNAround I actually think the following sentence is okay. I am slightly bothered by him pulling the gown on slowly but then having no time to lose, implying the need to hurry. Technically okay, if I was editing it, I‘d flag that as a problem. 6y
julesG @BookNAround let's just say, there are a few lines within the book that could have done with some extra TLC/editing. 6y
Jess7 👍🏼🤗 6y
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