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Have I mentioned the only thing I hate more than a book that ends on a cliffhanger (always a cheap gambit to keep a reader interested in a series when the author can't rely on the quality of the book to do so), is a cliffhanger at the end of long book? Considering this is an omnibus collecting a bunch of sequential novellas originally published separately, I can only imagine how frustrating the original reading experience was. 1/?
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I honestly wish there was more time spent discussing the meta aspects of interacting with story worlds reliant on formulas, but I recognize pushing the action forward, especially in a novella, makes that difficult.
Considering that one character is identified as a stand-up comic and the other as a comedienne, humour was a little thin on the ground.
Collection really could have benefitted from another editorial pass, to correct formatting, missing words, punctuation, etc.
I think given the credit attributed to a Kickstarter campaign, this was a project brought in on a shoestring budget, and unfortunately it shows.
There were rich backstories hinted at and the shadowy High Council and increasing dimensional disturbances definitely need a spotlight and a magnifying glass thrown on it, which just makes me that much more bummed that it doesn't appear the author will be giving such material the denouement it deserves. 🙎🏼♂️ I will be happy to be proven wrong, I just hope it's not going to take another five years. 2y