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If characters had been more fleshed out it would have made them feel more alive and kept reading more interesting.

This had two timelines and skipping between them distracted reading flow. This still was somehow intriguing read but slow pacing made everything feel less thrilling.

The story itself was good but the way this was written could have been better. I see potential here and still liked this.

Thanks for recommendation @Sleepswithbooks