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allisonjackson
Panpan

Round of applause for McBride tackling these issues that most people (and authors) just breeze over. She was able to bring awareness using their inner thoughts. That said I am not a fan of this style of book, I don‘t like the novel in verse writing or fantasy reads. Absolutely nothing against McBride taking on these topics and themes is super important I will absolutely keep this on my bookshelf to recommend to students it‘s just not my cup of tea

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William_Harwood

“Sometimes your own mind will unroot you.“
McBride doesn't just write about mental health, she teaches it. Through poetic metaphor, students explore how depression distorts daily life. People cast spells to hide pain. Brains “think too much,“ even when endorphines are gone. Students examine performance, masking, and the quiet toll of overthinking, all within a lyrical and accessible framework.

katiegregory I really like that you said she teaches mental health, because I hadn‘t seen it from that perspective. I could see this book being a great way to explain depression and mental health to people who don‘t have experience with it, especially for younger readers. 2d
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shelbsreads
Panpan

The book deserves credit for tackling important, often taboo topics like mental illness and generational trauma, particularly within the Black community. That said, its execution falls short. The fantasy elements are vague, the worldbuilding lacks depth, and key terms are poorly explained. With so many competing themes, none are given the depth they deserve.

sammiegdeas I will say, I appreciate McBride's bravery for tackling mental health issues for all people, but especially in the Black community. It is not talked about nor regarded as important as it is. Fantasy is a genre I tend to avoid because it is not my style, so it was a more difficult read for me. However, I am glad I read it because I can recommend it to students who get lost in fantasy. I also think it would be cool to pull excerpts from the novel! 3d
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shelbsreads

McBride illustrates Whimsy‘s depression through bold language, shifting structure, and layout. Parentheses echo intrusive thoughts, while her right-aligned dialogue visually sets her apart, showing her sense of isolation. Sudden changes in structure reflect the confusion and unpredictability of recovery. I have never read a book formatted in such a way before.

katiegregory I have also never read a book that is formatted like this, which is part of the reason it took me so long to read. The other books we have read in this course were easy to read, but this book required more of my attention and brain power to comprehend. I did enjoy reading it though, I love when the book design adds to the storyline (whether that be in-text design or cover design). 3d
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sammiegdeas
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Mehso-so

McBride weaves a beautiful story about perseverance. The fantastical elements were not my cup of tea; however, I could see many YA readers enjoying this book. My favorite part of McBride's novel is the final message that one is never alone. Mental illness is often a struggle behind closed doors, but there is always someone rooting for you. I would love to include this novel in my classroom library and recommend it to my whimsy-loving students.

shelbsreads Agreed, it got a bit confusing at points to me. However, I can see why this book would be intriguing to many readers. I applaud the author for tackling such a complex topic that needs more attention. 3d
natalie_e I agree! I think sometimes things with the fantastical elements became muddled or unclear, but the attention to an important message still shines through at the end of this book 3d
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sammiegdeas
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McBride's novel appeals to so many students with her characters. Mental health conditions and prejudice against black kids are at the forefront of the novel, but are not overwhelming for adolescent minds. These issues are not sugarcoated, yet they are not made too graphic for YA readers. McBride's novel encourages adolescents to learn about issues which, in turn, encourages them to use their voices for change.

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jkmac9717
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One thing I loved about this book was the attention it brought to Black mental health. Unfortunately, people of color are not as widely recognized for their mental health issues because of past (and ongoing) racial prejudice, but this book highlights their struggles and journeys navigating this complex topic. The fantastical garden allegory and inclusion of Black spirituality made this discussion unique but also digestable for younger audiences!

tatumlanders I also think that we should highlight Black mental health more in literature! I remember Faerry's father claiming that Black people, specifically Black men, don't go to therapy or take medication, as if it were a way of life rather than a choice. I am deeply aware of my ignorance about that experience, and know that I need to read more books to increase my awareness. 5d
katiegregory One thing I really loved about this book was how McBride tied in African folklore through Mama Wata and Baba Yaga. I took a course on African literature in May and we spent a lot of time talking about the influence of the water deity, so it was really cool to see those figures tied into modern literature. 3d
William_Harwood When Faery's father told him that he didn't get to feel depressed, I was furious. Men are often told to bottle up their emotions, especially the negative ones, which never benefits anyone. I loved Whimsy's journey, and I know it's her narrative. I wish there were more about Faery's difficulties. 2d
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jkmac9717
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I noted an activity idea inspired by something from one of my classes that could work with this book too! Just like Whimsy calls upon fairy tale/myth/folklore characters with their own lessons that help her, students could research their own character, find a lesson they could teach or advice they could give for their IRL lives, and then write a letter or advice column “from“ that character. Maybe Whimsy's reflection strategy could help them too!

annagsears This is an AWESOME idea! I'm thinking more in the 9th-grade sphere here, but a focus on narrative would also be significant in presenting different ways to construct a story. One does not necessarily need to write in “book“ format, but in verse, art, etc, and there are a plethora of ways to do that using fairytale characters. 5d
alaynaroper I absolutely love this idea! It creates a deeper understanding and connection between the readers and characters. It would also be a great idea for them to attempt to mimic the style and utilize it like a mentor text as a separate assignment and get the absolute most from the story! 3d
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