pickBordering on a pick/so-so for me. I loved Carlotta, she was an amazing MC. Full of humour to cover the awful life she‘s had in prison. And there was some laugh out loud thinking from Carlotta.
It was the writing that moves it down a bit for me. The dialect was fine- you got into the rhythm- though there were very long passages. The switches between 1st and 3rd person irritated me so much and ruined the flow. Just stick with Carlotta!
TrishB #booked2023 #bookwithatransperson 2y
Cinfhen I did audio and I think that REALLY ELEVATED my experience 2y
TrishB @Cinfhen I think this is one of the few times I was thinking audio would work so much better here 👍🏻 the constant internal dialogue probably sounded brilliant. 2y
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Cinfhen @TrishB 💯🤗 2y
Ruthiella I bought this in hard copy on a whim and am looking forward to reading it. But I‘ll keep your critique in mind. Sometimes knowing that stuff going in helps me. 2y
BkClubCare Audio!! So good. At least try a sample 😃 2y
carolcharityhome Hi 2y
TrishB @Ruthiella I think@it does help 👍🏻 2y
Cinfhen Look what Trish wrote @BarbaraBB 1y
BarbaraBB @Cinfhen Yes! Trish describes exactly what I‘m struggling with but I will stick with it! Thanks 🩵 1y
Cinfhen I had a feeling that might be how you were feeling @barbarabb good luck 🍀 1y
TrishB @BarbaraBB @Cinfhen I nearly gave up a couple of times! 1y
BarbaraBB I am a 100 pages in and still not really drawn in 🤷🏻♀️ 1y
TrishB @BarbaraBB you know how I feel about bailing 😁 1y
BarbaraBB I just did 🤣 1y
TrishB @BarbaraBB 👍🏻 too many books too little time! 1y
BarbaraBB Exactly, this one just frustrated me! 1y
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