so-so3/5 but a so-so for the narrator's repetition of things that he had just explained, and the continuity error where Dr Gordon the police surgeon became Dr Duncan. Also, the word "Doctor" was inconsistently capitalized when referring to "the doctor". I suspect one more editorial pass that fixed all these things might have made this a stronger book (although it was by no means terrible).
rabbitprincess And yes I am aware that noticing inconsistent capitalization is nerdy, but it is an occupational hazard. #editorlife 6y
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