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I understand that this is a first novel; and it starts out ok, if definitely unpolished. Things do not improve. Indeed they go downhill till the bitter and ridiculous ending (or should I say prelude to a sequel?). Do not read.
As an aside, why in so many mediocre (or worse) mysteries, with enough incredible coincidences to choke a horse, do the supposed sleuths no even mention the improbability of the situation?