If I could string together all the lines of text I‘ve read aloud on the road, I‘d be able to tie a bow of words around the world.
If I could string together all the lines of text I‘ve read aloud on the road, I‘d be able to tie a bow of words around the world.
So much potential with characters, narration and plot line, but this fanciful tale of an incarcerated young woman who passes prison time by revealing her history to inmates during "story time" didn't feel like it reached its potential. (I don't think those metaphors I posted were intended to be humorous...) Engaging story, just felt slightly unpolished and a bit amateur.
So much potential with characters, narration and plot line, but this fanciful tale of an incarcerated young woman who passes prison time by revealing her history to inmates during "story time" didn't feel like it reached its potential. (I don't think those metaphors I posted were intended to be humorous...) Engaging story, just felt slightly unpolished and a bit amateur.
Another one! What is with these similes? 😳😆
How does a metaphor like this make it past the editors? 😳 Not only it is it off-putting, it doesn't even make sense to me as a comparison.