bailed
DNF @13%
It's not YA, but it reads like YA.
Ash (Cinderella) is a con-artist. She's managed to ensnare the prince with her charm and (!) strong magic. Her step-mother trained her for this all her life. Now she's in the palace to do something or other in the weeks leading up to the royal wedding.
First person POV. Lots of words. So many empty words. (please imagine me saying this like Mrs Bennett complaining about her nerves)
1/?
World-building? I cannot imagine this world. Not enough information. And I can only presume so much from lace bodices on ballgowns and men wearing suits and ties. Princes, paupers, skullery maids, carriages,...
2/? 1y
And the final nail in the coffin: I can smell the sweet stench of a love-triangle. Apropos sweet stench, why call the other guy "Rance" that's so disgustingly close to rancid. I kept imagining him enveloped in a cloud of BO. 3/3 1y
1y