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The idea behind the story is cute, and it had some
good concepts, but it was tough to get through.
The characters, all of them, sounded young and
acted immature.Then the storyline...it tried to do too much and didn't do anything justice. Had the story only followed the broken relationship with her mother, or the budding romance, it would have been much better. The story was just too short to do justice to either one.
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