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Makaylaholton

Makaylaholton

Joined June 2025

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Makaylaholton
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Isaiah's story in “The Beans and Rice Chronicles of Isaiah Dunn“ was very moving and eye-opening in my opinion. We see Isaiah through his struggles of poverty, grief, being in a broken home, and family struggles. Through these challenges, he manages to find purpose, hope, and fortitude through his writing. I think it was really beautiful how he was able to connect with his father through his words and memories.

Makyah I also found the story very compelling too. The beans and rice chronicles gave a realistic insight to what someone else‘s life might look like and it‘s not always going to be good. It gave a deeper insight into why a child may act out in class because their home life isn‘t great. But I loved how reading and writing his Dad‘s stories gave him an escape from his struggles. 12h
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Makaylaholton

“But the time you spent on the actual court, you'll realize, was nowhere near as important as the time you spent in the bleachers,“ (de la Peña).

This quote from the story fully encapsulates the essence of what the narrator was trying to express. It just really shows the audience the importance of his journey rather than his end goal of being a great ball player, which is so important to the overall theme.

annagsears I agree! This story serves as an excellent reminder both for us and our students that the journey is the most crucial part of achieving a goal. This story can be beneficial when referencing the editing and revision process, as it may seem daunting at times; however, the process ultimately helps you grow as a writer. As the adage goes, “If at first you don't succeed, try, try again.“ 14h
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Makaylaholton
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When I began reading the first story, I was really shocked at how relatable and personal this story felt. I believe that the second-person point of view was a very high contributor to this effect, and it made following along a lot easier and realistic. What really caught my attention in this story was how specific and detailed the narration of emotion was. The way the protagonist took us through both his defeat and his triumph was really special.