This series is in desperate need of a good editor, but the story is compelling enough for me to keep reading despite the glaring errors in the manuscript.
Update: I finished the series. I do not regret reading it. I just wish she'd have had an editor...or a better editor. If she ever cleans up the manuscript, I'd be willing to go back and give it more stars.
This book was the definition of creative writing running amuck. Did it drive me insane? Yes. Am I going to keep reading? Also yes. I gotta see how the baddie becomes the love interest.
I just hope the author reins in the metaphors and ridiculous turns of phrase and just tells the story. I'm fully convinced that the FMC is actually insane because of the way her mind works.
I also graduated from college and became branch manager of my library. It's been a busy year.
Loyalty (Drexian Academy, book 2)
