There was a split second when she saw the music seeping out of the space between earbud and ear like a curl of steam or smoke.
There was a split second when she saw the music seeping out of the space between earbud and ear like a curl of steam or smoke.
This is novella-length, made up of two stories. The first is about two people who meet in Tokyo & spend several days in a love hotel & the second is about a beleaguered wife descending into a spiral of ennui & depression. Both written in stream of consciousness, the first one was affecting; how two people try to create & sustain an extraordinary moment outside of daily reality. The second needed an interesting 1st person voice but it lacked that.