Writing tip from Seabiscuit:
Think I‘m cinematic terms when you need to figure out if you want to create full motion or if you would prefer slow motion. In general, the faster you want a sentence to go, the less punctuation you will use. Every mark of punctuation slows a passage down to some degree.
And today I came across this interesting article
https://www.mentalfloss.com/article/75602/what-famous-novels-look-stripped-every...