

This wasn't a total waste of time, it had a decent premise, but the authors took way too long to develop the plot, and for the love of God, if you can't find your own typos, HIRE A FREAKING EDITOR!!!! I don't want to be a hater, but this is why I hesitate to read indie books. If you can't be bothered to publish a clean copy, why should I bother to read it? Don't be sloppy. Thank you, #grammarnazi