At times this one made me a little uncomfortable, which is not what you want from a romance. Her not telling him something, him knowing she was withholding, I was very aware that one honest discussion and the book could be a lot shorter. Also, the premise of the book, just seemed a bit lazy, a quick fix to make the relationship happen. There didn't seem to be any seduction or chemistry there to trigger the story Kleypas just forced the issue.