There were some great sections in this translation. Then there were bits of modern vernacular that pulled me right out. It ended up being so distracting and downgrading my rating. Remember how obnoxious people were with stuff like “fo‘ shizzle” and such? That‘s how this reads. And the profanity felt forced, trying to make this something it didn‘t otherwise feel like. I get why she did it, and her intro is great, but it felt like trying too hard.