I understand why Artemis has so much hate directed at it. The general consensus is that Jazz feels like a woman that‘s been written by a man and I agree, but really none of the characters fit into their normal confines. Even the bad guys feel goofy and inauthentic, and I think that‘s the point. But to say Artemis is lacking in plot or action is totally not true. You can tell Weir put a lot of thought into It, and I think that is also the point.